Third Person Omniscient

Sylvia was walking down the street feeling happy and content with the night air, when

 she came upon a strange boy. Alexander leaned against the street lamp, feeling tense and

 frustrated about the argument he had with his parents. Then, he suddenly heard footsteps.

 He turned, half hoping it was is father who had come to apologize and take him home,

 when he saw it was a girl from school his shoulders slumped. Upon seeing the familiar

 face of the boy Sylvia said “hi” in a happy tone and a smile on her face. “You’re the new

 guy at school, right?” Alexander opened his mouth to answer her question but closed it,

 afraid he may yell at her and hurt her feelings. Instead he turned and walked away,

 leaving a very stunned and confused Sylvia behind.

 

 

 

Third Person Limited Omniscient 

 

Sylvia was walking down the street feeling happy and content with the night air, when

 she came upon a strange boy. She walked closer, when the boy turned she realized who

 he was. “Hi” she said in a happy tone and a smile on her face. “You’re the new guy at

 school, right?” She saw him open his mouth but closed. Then he turned and walked away

 she felt very stunned and confused about his reaction.

 

 

 

 

Sylvia was walking down the street when she came upon a strange boy. She walked

 closer, when the boy turned she said “hi” with a smile on her face. “You’re the new guy 

 guy at school, right?” The boy opened his mouth but closed. Then he suddenly turned and

 walked away.