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My holiday recount (independently)
It all started when we went wellington. Its about 2 hours from Parmestinorth! We had to get on a fairy to get the south island. My newphew came us so did there mum dad and brother oh and of course my mum dad and brother. So when we got of the fairy/boat we where in piction. we didnt stop at piction because we needed to go to Kaikura. We reached at Kaikura t at about 9:30pm. My nephew, me, newphes brother Karann, and my brother , Sebaj. stayed in the same room. next day we set off to Christchurch. As soon as we reached Christchurch we went to look for the Antartic center when we found it we went inside. There we found a boy named ET he was cute!! So we said “Would you like to come with us on our trip” he said yes please!! And so he came with us on the rest of the trip. In the Antarctic center we sound a room that you can feel how cold it is! Then we saw a room with penguins.
Holiday recount (reworked with teacher conferencing)
The Bungy jump
‘AAAAAAAAAAA’ I screamed as my brother shook the swinging bridge of NZ. My brother is a nerd, his hair is black and it shimmers in the light. 2 seconds later I was hanging off the bridge. In a click of a finger I was hanging off the bridge, I screamed so hard! One moment later my head was stuck in the water. Suddenly my head popped out and I swung onto land, unbuckled my bungy jumping belt which I had used for protection. It felt like my heart was pumping at the speed of light. And My legs were shaking as I was lying flat on the ground!
Below is my reflection on my recount writing
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My name is Anjan Singh and im in room 4 and in year 6.
My favourite Colour is Yellow
My favourite Anime/Cartoon is Code Geass series.
My Faviroute subject is I.C.T
My Favorite Thing is Computers
My Faviroute Sport us Cricket
My best freind is Samuel McClay and he is in room 4 year 6.
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