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We have been developing our narrative writing by using a Skeleton Plot. We are given the 'bones' of a story and we then write a story based around these main parts. Enjoy reading my first skeleton plot.
The Hilton family is a lovely family who go to the countryside for the holidays. They set off in their clean, shiny KIA. As they approach the cottage, it is a beautiful sight. It is freshly painted; the trees tower over the KIA like a giant cascading waterfall of the Niagara Falls in Canada.
Rachel looks towards the farm next to the cottage and lets out a frightening gasp. There in the crop field is a lifeless scarecrow, its eyes lead into nothing. Its head is bulging out. Rachel turns pale.
They enter the dusty house and a fit of coughing erupts throughout the family. “What is this” complains Ben while coughing. Rachel sneaks out of the room and greedily, sneakily takes the cosiest room. Confused, frustrated, annoyed, Ben slumps and falls asleep in the living room. He awakes with a start, nobody is home. He is hungry so he walks over to the kitchen. Then it happens!!!! The phone rings. Ben picks it up.........The only sound he hears was heavy breathing. He hangs the phone up slowly. He looks around and starts feeling scared as if somebody was spying on him. His heart skips a beat as he realises that the horrifying scarecrow is gone from the paddock. He screams out loud. He languishes in the freezing living room awaiting his family’s arrival.
He becomes more frightened as he tries to turn on the 160 inch plasma TV but it wouldn’t do anything. There is a knock on the door. His eyes bulge with horror as he realises that there is nobody there. Ben tries to ring his mum’s mobile. It rings in his mum and dad’s bedroom, so he runs into it. The silhouette of the scarecrow looms over the window. Ben screamed as the scarecrow glared at him from the window. He falls to ground screaming in absolute horror. The phone rings. Ben shakily picks it up. All he hears is cruel laughing, as Ben screams for the last time............
Below is my scarecrow reflection.
Article posted June 16, 2010 at 05:00 AM •
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