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The bush was cold and damp like a sponge soaked in Antarctica water. There was little wind but enough to make you shiver. The trickles of water sounded like running the bath. There were leaves and rocks in the water that looked like fish and the sun was like a giant torch shinning brightly. When the sun’s rays hit the leaves they glowered and sparkled.
Under the leaves was a tiny hut with a think fact poking out. His eyes were dark brown with a tiny sparkle in them. His hair was black as it shone in the sun.. You could see little curls like worms that were painted black. His limbs were very red. When he walked his jeans hit the ground like a rag getting dragged. He felt hungry. He only had only one coconut that he hoped would last him until he found more food and shelter.
Tim made spear from wood then he set off to find a wild pig. In the distance he saw a little baby pig sleeping. He went up to it but the mother heard him and came racing back in a terrible rage. He ran looking behind him and suddenly found him at a cliff edge. The pig butted him, he fell backwards. Crack! He landed on a flat rock and he had broken his wrist. Once it stopped hurting he reached into his pocket and pulled out some flint. It took him a long time to start a fire. He made the fire smoke so help might come. He heard a helicopter. They let down a rope for him to climb up. Tim could not hear them with the helicopter going. So they yelled to him again but still he did not hear them. So they looked down and saw him hanging.
They towed him up because he could not climb up with his broken arm. They took him to the village. His family was so happy to see him they had a big party and fixed his arm.
Article posted October 13, 2008 at 07:49 PM •
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