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Rain
Splish, splash
The rain goes bang
Boom, boom
The lightning strikes down
Zoom!
The rain falls stronger
Drop, drop
The rain stopped.
Article posted October 29, 2008 at 08:06 AM •
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Wow! what a nice poem!
Comment Posted on November 16, 2009 at 07:07 AM by
Yasmeen Farah Grade 9


It's short but there are some feelings inside your poem. I felt like I was at home hearing lightning's roar. I was scared!!!!
Comment Posted on November 5, 2009 at 03:56 AM by
Subin

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