We are a group of 7th graders from Colorado who want to practice our writing and communication skills. We are excited to expand the walls of our classroom and collaborate with other classes! Please leave us comments and your blog URL, so we can respond back to you!
My Introductary Paragraph
Us, as humans remember things. We do many different things to represent what we are remembering such as having assemblies, making artwork, or even having no school or work. We remember things as little as getting in trouble with our parents or things as important as 9/11. This is an essay that explains why we remember.
I am looking for feedback on my first sentence. I want something more creative than just, "Us, as humans remember things."