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I`m thankful for my family. My family is a great family and it’s a caring family. My friends are great friends sometimes they are jerks to others. My family and friends are caring people. That’s why I thankful for.
Article posted October 7, 2011 at 03:24 PM •
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I am impressed with your paragraph structure. You have clear opening and closing sentences. It's important to have caring family and friends in your life. Our motto at Gateway Community School is "Take Care of Each Other", and our students try to think about that motto each time they make a decision. I enjoyed reading your work!
Mrs. A. Ellis
Comment Posted on October 12, 2011 at 10:24 PM by
Mrs. Ellis

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