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by sabrina teacher: Tim Comfort

When i look in your eyes When I look into your eyes, I am nothing but surprised.

I know about your past and how it didn't last,

How you got hurt, burnt, abused and used,
and I bet you're confused.

You deserve better, if not always and forever.

You said you didn't care, But you couldn't bear,
Isn't it such a scare.
Let me into your life and I'll show you that I care.
Like an endless dream I'll always be there.

I know you're busy but please make time.
Working so much should be a crime.

Forget about the past and look to the future,
I know your not ready, and I'm not trying to push you,
Just wanted to let you know that I'll always be with you.

http://www.poemslovers.com/love_poems/desired_love/poems/1230.html

My opinon on this poem
I really enjoy this poem.
it is a poem that is inspiring to me
and a subject that I write on when I write my poems

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i love this poem sabrina totally awesome:)
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