Great job! I enjoyed reading this.:) You seem to like adding violence to each stanza, like: hit, bitten, stabbed, killed. That made it unique, unlike all the rest. Well done :)
Comment Posted on February 25, 2011 at 06:47 AM by
SG
Excellent Poem! I enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work!
Comment Posted on November 30, 2010 at 12:44 PM by
Tanya ACS 12