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This is my writing sample on the Skeleton Plot.
It was finally for sale, the old Victorian hall was up for grabs. But there was a twist to that hall, a twist that nobody knew. It has a staff of spooky, scary ghosts including a butler, and other servants.
The ghosts can’t leave the old, dusty hall, like a teleporter back into the hall in the middle of space, they languish in the hall. It is extremely important that they like the new owners. If they have to shair their hall, they feel that they should have a say at who moves in….
A series of dumb people visit the hall to see if they want to buy it. First a family comes in, but the ghosts frighten them off by dropping vases and galses around them. Next a head teacher comes in. The simpilest way to frighten ANYBODY. Make spooky noises, there ran the head teacher screaming to her husband scared, horrified, petrified.
Finally a young couple visit the hall. The ghosts were quite out of ideas because the couple are not scared at all!!! They bellow at the couple but it doesn’t work. Eventually after a long day, they make friends with the ghosts. The couple buy the hall. The ghosts take on their old jobs and help the couple to live happily in their new fantastic, awesome home.
Below is my reflection.
Article posted June 29, 2010 at 08:44 PM •
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My name is Anjan Singh and im in room 4 and in year 6.
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