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Once there was a forest. The forest that had a lot of strange animals. the wurst was the tocky. once there was a man named jimmy that went in the forest. he brong a sword for his safety. he was looking for some tum tums. so he went, then he herd a loud row. it was the tocky. then the tocky ran to try to eat him insted jimmy sabed tocky then he got a tum tum and went home happily.
Article posted January 29, 2010 at 02:02 PM •
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did he get a lot of food or a little food or did he get no food at all
Comment Posted on March 3, 2010 at 11:32 AM by
was this a true story? If not what made you think of making this story. It sounds really good!
Comment Posted on February 24, 2010 at 11:41 AM by
That's intense dude! I like how you put your heart and soul into it and then when you are going to write you write a beautiful story. Way to go!
Comment Posted on February 24, 2010 at 11:40 AM by
This was a really interesting! I liked the structure and it was fun to read. What does "sabe" mean? Is it a portmanteau?
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